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Tuesday, 12 March 2019

Descriptive writing




The Lightning flashed before my eyes, there were a thousand thunderbolts streaming down from the dark night sky. I was shivering from the cold like I was in Antarctica. It was pouring down with wet soggy rain, then a cow fell to the ground did it get hit by the lightning.



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  1. Anonymous12 March 2019 at 13:17

    Hi Sam,
    This was a great piece of discriptive writing, but I think you could add more punctuation E.G Full stops, Question marks, Exclamation marks, Semi Columns. Other wise from that, it was great!
    -Lauren

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    1. Anonymous12 March 2019 at 13:21

      Thanks for the feed back I'll make sure to have more in the future.

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