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Wednesday, 27 March 2019

The incident of Pig the Pug


The incident of Pig the Pug

“We are at the scene of the crime were The one called Pig the pug fell out a window or was he shoved. We are here with his closest friend Trevor the sausage dog”. “I didn’t push him he piled up his toys in a huff and climbed it making it wobble side to side then he fell out the window”. “He sabotaged me” said pig in a wheelchair rolling towards us. Trevor was so angry he jump on pigs toys and push them into the bin and laughed and laughed and laughed while pig cry and screamed. Trevor and pig went to court and that's were a big disaster will unfold.
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  1. Anonymous28 March 2019 at 13:46

    Hi Sam,
    Great story, it really hooked me in! One thing to think about is the spelling of words in the story like: "Hear we have pigs closest friend" It's not "Hear" it's "Here". Maybe capital letters on names as well.
    Other then that, I loved it.
    - Lauren

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    1. Anonymous28 March 2019 at 13:52

      thank lauren,
      I have done what you said and it makes my article sound way better.
      From Sam

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