The Beast Of The Haunted School
The floorboards creaked as I slowly eased closer to the door at the other side of the hallway. There were blood picking Hooke's were bags were hung up by children rushing into school. The floors were wet and soggy like a big beast drooled on it. I could hear birds flapping in the bushes it sounded like a horror movie. I Finally reached the door, I slowly creaked it open to see a beast about two foot tall with fur all around the body like a big mutated dog. As soon as I looked in its big black bleeding eyes I slammed the door and raced back down the hall suddenly I trip and fell. My leg was wrapped in sharp prickly wires. The beast slashed through the door down and race up to me this was the end of my life.
Monday, 17 September 2018
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Hi Sam Its Zach I really like your Story about the haunted school. I think it was scary. Next time check your grammar, I found a mistake in the first line." at he other side of the hallway". I look forward to reading more from you.
ReplyDeleteThank you Zach
DeleteI had a look and my grammar and now it's looking a lot better than before.