Paragraph Writing
WALT...
- Use paragraphs to link similar ideas together
- write in structured, well developed paragraphs that flow well from one to the next within the text
- use linking words and phrases to link paragraphs for effect
- Use paragraphs to link similar ideas together
- write in structured, well developed paragraphs that flow well from one to the next within the text
- use linking words and phrases to link paragraphs for effect
with the following picture we had to write paragraphs with links between each of them. first we had to write down the five senses which were see, hear, feel, taste and smell. once we finished filling the senses out we had to start writing. it was hard especially linking the paragraphs but in the end I think it turned out great.
Next Steps: To get more ideas down and make it longer
What I Enjoyed: Writing down the paragraphs
What I Found Challenging: to link the paragraphs together.
His girlfriend dumped him in the middle of a jog through the woods at 6:00. His heart shattered to
pieces, he didn’t want her to see his emotions so he ran, as far away as possible tears built in front
of his eyes making it hard to see, then he tripped and landed in a river losing a shoe he continued
stepping on prickles that stabbed his foot. He was so distracted he didn’t see the cabin.
pieces, he didn’t want her to see his emotions so he ran, as far away as possible tears built in front
of his eyes making it hard to see, then he tripped and landed in a river losing a shoe he continued
stepping on prickles that stabbed his foot. He was so distracted he didn’t see the cabin.
He tripped and fell to the floor, He staggered with pain into a corner bitter tears flowing from his eyes.
A window flapped open and hit him on the head sending him forth into another corner, some tears
slithered into his mouth. The taste was not pleasant. The trees got angry and started attacking the
cabin scaring the life out of him, he jumped back into a spider web a spider bit him on the arm. He
felt woozy and fell to the ground.
A window flapped open and hit him on the head sending him forth into another corner, some tears
slithered into his mouth. The taste was not pleasant. The trees got angry and started attacking the
cabin scaring the life out of him, he jumped back into a spider web a spider bit him on the arm. He
felt woozy and fell to the ground.
He woke up and put his hand on his forehead then he noticed the spider bit from last night it was
swollen, he had to get to a hospital but he had no idea where to go. He was lost, he wandered around
the forest looking for a way back to town. The poison from the spider bite was getting to his head he
couldn't walk properly and felt like he was going to fall, he had to find help.
swollen, he had to get to a hospital but he had no idea where to go. He was lost, he wandered around
the forest looking for a way back to town. The poison from the spider bite was getting to his head he
couldn't walk properly and felt like he was going to fall, he had to find help.
He woke up a man leaning over him. It was his dad,he sat up he was in a hospital room, he looked
at his arm it was better the date was 1 may 2017, he was in a coma for 1 month. He remembers
when his girlfriend dumped him, his face changed from confusion to sadness. His life has changed
forever.
at his arm it was better the date was 1 may 2017, he was in a coma for 1 month. He remembers
when his girlfriend dumped him, his face changed from confusion to sadness. His life has changed
forever.
By Samuel Hadfield
