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Sunday, 18 March 2018

Hedgehog lift off




WALT-  wright a story using a visual prompt

this year room 8 has been doing quick wrights
hedgehog lift off

My time has come it's time to crawl into the real world I had just turned thirteen I was all alone I crawled out of the den to see big eyes and massive hands it was weird I crawled closer to see what it was. I turned my head left and right I was in the clear I slowly walked towards the thing, “meow” there was a furry beast standing in front of me staring at something. It was me I curled up into a ball, was this the end something picked me up, I opened my eyes and sore that the thing was a human that my mum told stories about. He sat me down next to a bowl of cookies I started chomping away this was the start of a new life.

Description: We were given a picture and we had to wright a story in a suntan amount of time.

Reflection: What i found easy was writing the story with interesting words.
What i found hard was thinking of what the moral of the story was.

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